I asked some year 12 students to comment on my cover and contents page so that I could gain appropriate feedback from my target audience. This is the feedback I got from them:
Chandni:"I really like the model's smile because it is eye-catching and the angle of gaze is good too. I also like the images on the contents page as they link well with the theme but I don't like the masthead font/
Shuko: I really like colour scheme on both pages but don't like the masthead font.
Rubab: I like the masthead as it is very creative but I don't like the fact that you have some white gaps.
Jannath: I like the variety of images used on the contents page and they link well to the captions mentioned on the cover page. I don't like the fact that the images only shows girls as most sixth forms and colleges are mixed.
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